I recently found this poem that I wrote sometime last year and I wanted to share it. I never finished it but as I intend to write no more on it, I suppose it is complete.
In the new Jerusalem
How will it be?
What will it be like?
What will I see?
There shall be no sorrows there,
There shall not be any tears.
There shall not be any dying there
And no, there will not be any fears.
There shall not be any crying there,
There shall not be any pain.
For God who rules in this place
Will everything sustain.
The fearful will not enter there,
Nor will the unbelieving.
Murderers, sorcerers, *****mongers and idolaters,
Shall be with those who lie and are deceiving.
They shall have their part in the lake
That is burning with fire and brimstone.
But there are those who will be in Heaven –
It is those who by Jesus are atoned.
The Holy Jerusalem –
How will it look?
What is it made of?
Let us take a look.
It has the glory of God.
Her light is like precious stones.
There is a wall both great and high
Are some of the things that are known.
There are twelve gates
Set in the great wall.
Three each on the north, south, east and west,
But still that is not all.
To the KING be all the glory!
Rebekah ~ The LORD’s Daughter
Wow, you finally wrote something on your blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL!
I like that poem, btw. Isn't it going to be totally awesome?
Hi! I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem! Thanks so much for commenting on it.
The one you posted is also very interesting. I really liked it, though. It had a very unique ending, didn't you think? But it was very pretty.
Do you like to write any poetry of your own? Just wondering, you know. I like experimenting with poetry, and I enjoy talking about it with other people who do too.
Anyway, that's all,
Namarie,
Raora
Wow, great poem Rebekah. I enjoyed that. : )
MJ
Wow…that's a great poem! You wrote that? That's really good.
By the way, we just wanted to let you know that we posted the latest edition of The Insider – go visit it!
God bless,
-Anne Truly, Eva Surely & John Shannon
Hello. I love your poem and your blog is very pretty. :)
I actually like that ending to the poem. I gives a feeling of incompleteness (in a good way) and desire. Fitting for this subject, I think.
Heather
I like the colors of your blog too.
I'll be waiting for the pictures! I love the two sisters blogs but you just need to post more on them!
Amy
Nice poem! Thanks for sharing. You have such a talent for writing poetry.
Thank you for the comment you left on my blog for my b-day.
Sorry it took me so long to respond. I’m trying to catch up in the blog world, since I’ve been so behind the past few weeks.
I hope you have a great weekend.
~Alexandra
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