~I am crazy!

– – –

 

First, I just thought I would let everyone know that, my CHRISTmas poems, may or may not continue… I’m debating on whether to do them once a week, only a few times a week or give them up altogether. We had a few sudden and unexpected changes coming, and I don’t know where and when I’ll have the time for them so often. I am thinking about putting one up on Saturday… Maybe reviewing the week?

Anyway… back to why I am crazy…

Right now I am supposed to be focusing on writing 24 Days Before Christmas. The goal was supposed to be, that it was finished by the end of the year. You know what instead? I have this song by Gabriel Hudelson playing in my head: The Other Side of Midnight.

Why is that not good? I really like the song but… with that song, I see a story… a story that is begging me to write it down… I even started it, when I joined Perry’s Scribble Fest a week and a half ago. I thought I could leave it alone after that. Instead, while I’m trying to focus on Deputy Trent’s dilemma and two families caroling in the cold, I keep wandering off to a dark forest, following a man racing through the trees. What to do, what to do?? I think this will be a short story, but you just never know when I get writing. I really ought to finish 24 Days Before Christmas too!

So… if 24 Days Before Christmas gets neglected, it will be because I’m off writing a completely different story, that isn’t even remotely related to my current project! :p

I better go do some writing now… I’ll leave you all with the story that began this post:

 

Leonard raced past the tree, colliding with a prickly bush.The sounds of shouting men and barking dogs pounded in his ears. Pushing himself up from his knees he began running again. He simply had to make it.

He turned on the light on his wristwatch. He had ten minutes. Ten minutes before the borders closed. Ten minutes to get through the forest.

The thoughts of his family flooded Leonard’s mind. His beloved wife, Agatha. Peter, his eldest son, Millicent, James, Annie and the baby,who he hadn’t met yet. The little one had been born, after he had parted with his family. He imagined the child’s face. She would have dark eyes like her mother, as well as her beautiful blond hair. Perhaps she had his own nose, and a few of his expressions.

The man grimaced as he scraped his leg on a low protruding tree branch, but he chose to ignore it and run on. The dogs were howling now.Did that mean anything important? He looked at his watch; eight minutes.

He simply had to run faster! He pushed on. His heart pounded, the thuds in his chest causing a dull pain against his overtaxed lungs. How much longer could he run? Could he make it to the border? The thought of his family, left alone without him, grieving his loss, uncertain of his fate, sped him on. He had to make it!

His thoughts began to wander again. His mother was with his family. His dear mother. He and his family were all she had left. His father was gone, as well as his brother. Poor, dear mother, in these her latter years, so near alone.

He pulled up his watch again. Six minutes. Was he sure he was going in the right direction? What if he had swerved. No. Dark as it was,he was certain that he was still going North. He had to be. The border was to the North – he had to make it! How much farther was it?

A raindrop splashed against his cheek. Rain would cool him down, but would serve to make his path more difficult if it came down in torrents. He began to pray. The rain came down harder, drowning out the voices of the dogs and the men. How close were they, anyway? He wasn’t a very good judge when it was quiet, now with the pouring water, he was even more bewildered as to their distance.

To the KING be all the glory!

~Of Writing and Reading

– – –

My family just got back from a vacation. We drove several hours to a neighboring state and stayed a few days with my Uncle and Aunt. We had a pleasant trip.

When I was planning for the trip, I imagined that I would spend most of my many hours riding in the car, writing on 24 Days Before Christmas. I imagined that I could have my book at least half way done by the time we returned home. In reality? I wrote a full two pages in the car. Two pages. Hardly anything compared to what I had hoped to accomplish. I did get some writing done though. We had some down time at the house and I was able to spend it productively where my writing was concerned. Altogether I wrote close to two chapters on vacation. Still not nearly as much as I planned, but still good. My mystery is coming along pretty well, though I need to start lining up my suspects. At this point you don’t really know who to suspect and you almost don’t even know if you should suspect anyone in the first place! (If that didn’t sound like a confusing sentence!)

I am having a problem with one of my characters though. His name is Harry. Harry’s biggest problem is that he’s kind of wooden and boring. I haven’t been able to make him “spring to life”! I’m trying to work on it, but for some reason, I can’t seem to do it. I’ve even considered getting rid of the character altogether, but it isn’t likely that I’ll succeed at doing that. I’m rarely successful at deleting any of my characters. That being the case, I need to somehow, bring more life to this character. We’ll see how it goes…

My other goal for our trip, was to read when I wasn’t writing in the car. Not only did I not read very much, I didn’t touch any of my books, except my Bible, during the entire trip. I’m trying to read Davy Crockett’s autobiography. Mr. Crockett had an interesting life, from what I’ve read so far. While the book is interesting, I am finding the grammar a bit difficult to follow and parts of the story lacking in relevance. LORD willing, I will post a review after I finish. Oh yes, and did I mention that Mr. Crockett had an obvious desire to become the president of the United States? He makes it very clear in this book that he wants to move higher politically and that being the president was his goal. I’m only a quarter of the way through the book so far too. I am enjoying it overall though and I hope to finish the book during the next week or two.

I need to go work on reorganizing some bookshelves now…

To the KING be all the glory!

~Here We Go!

– – –

24 Days Before Christmas is a book that I began to write in November of last year. It was inspired by a conversation I had on Thanksgiving Day with my sister Bethany and some good friends of mine who had read some of my previous writings.

In bed that night, while I was writing down a few notes from the comments my sister and my friends had made about my weaker points in writing, I was hit with the inspiration to write this story and try some of the things their comments suggested. I was already itching to write something with Christmas anyway and none of my other books were focusing on it. So I began… and then our family moved to a new house and I got sidetracked. Now, with the Christmas season only a month and a half away, I think I’m ready to try again and I thought I would share a few of the things I am trying to incorporate and especially work on in this story.

First of all, and rather irrelevant to “improvements”, but still challenging, my sister was begging for a mystery – a murder mystery in fact. She thought I could write one, I disagreed – and now I’m trying to prove myself wrong. One of the main plots of 24 Days Before Christmas is a mystery.

Secondly, I had begun to avoid descriptions of places and things to some extent. One of my friends encouraged me to “paint a picture” with my words. Somehow that really stuck with me and I’m really trying to do that in this book.

Thirdly… being lighthearted. I tend to write on the darker side. At least in more recent works. Not depressing or anything (well I hope!), but not really lighthearted either. Somehow in this book, I have to make the joy of celebrating Christ’s birth and the excitement of the holiday season, blend with a murder mystery. Not in a bad way at all and my idea seems like a perfect blending, but it’s still only in my head, not on paper. We’ll see how it turns out.

There were a few other things, which I won’t mention now. I’m doing a bit of rewriting on what I had already written and then… off I go! I’ll leave those of you who haven’t read it, with the beginning of the first chapter:

“The clouds hung heavily over Evergreen, nearly burying the tiny town under their oppressive folds. The barren trees lining the streets, groaned and trembled under their heavy burdens of white, as snow mercilessly continued to add to their great weight. Snowplows had cleared the asphalt-covered streets, but even they couldn’t prevent new snow from taking the place of the old or ice from creating danger zones nearly invisible to even the most cautious drivers.

The sidewalks looked like melted Rocky Road ice cream – a curious mixture of snow, mud and ice, so often trampled, melted and refrozen as to make each element inseparable from the others.

Icicles dangled precariously from slanted roofs, mingling with brightly colored lights and Christmas decorations. The decorations gave a sense of holiday cheer to the atmosphere despite the filthy pathways and rundown buildings.”

 

To the KING be all the glory!

Save

~”Hark how the bells, sweet silver bells…”

I’m in a Christmas mood lately. I’m not sure why. Maybe because it’s finally started to get really hot outside? I keep singing Christmas songs (just ask my sister, I’ve been driving her nuts!) and I started practicing a Christmas song on the piano. Further, this has my brain working:

 

“The clouds hung heavily over Evergreen, nearly burying the tiny town under their oppressive folds. The barren trees lining the streets, groaned and trembled under their heavy burdens of white, as snow mercilessly continued to add to their great weight. Snowplows had cleared the asphalt-covered streets, but even they couldn’t prevent new snow from taking the place of the old or ice from creating danger zones nearly invisible to even the most cautious drivers.

 

The sidewalks looked like melted Rocky Road ice cream – a curious mixture of snow, mud and ice, so often trampled, melted and refrozen as to make each element inseparable from the others.

 

Icicles dangled precariously from slanted roofs, mingling with brightly colored lights and Christmas decorations. The decorations gave a sense of holiday cheer to the atmosphere despite the filthy pathways and rundown buildings.”

 

That just makes 110 degrees feel even hotter by comparison! It’s an excerpt from one of the books I’m writing: 24 Days Before Christmas. I had started it last December – or actually, very late November, but with moving and everything, it got put on hold. I thought I would wait until next Christmas to continue it, but now I’m not so sure. It looks so fun and it’s different than some of my other books. Besides, it has such a bright and cheery theme – well, besides the murder mystery…  I’m just not convinced though, that I can write the story without listening to Christmas music… hmm… If I can overcome that obstacle, I might have this book finished by the end of the Summer…If I decide to work on it. Grandmother’s Letters could really use my attention about now too and it’s actually set in the Summer right now! I’m not sure what to do… Maybe I’ll decide while I work on cleaning up the kitchen…

 

To the KING be all the glory!


~Not Sure What to Do with These

I was just playing around the other day and these two characters popped their way into my head. I’m not sure what I’m going to do with them at this point – Keep them or toss them. Anyone think either of them sound like they would make a good storyline and that I should try to continue?

Eloise

Eloise crouched beneath the blankets trying to appear invisible. Her sodden pillow felt cool against her burning cheek. The moon peeked into the room through the burgundy curtains, outlining the maple tree outside. The heavy tread of footsteps stopped before her door, then faded away into the deafening silence of night. She rolled over, pushing back the covers and breathing heavily.  She suddenly felt hot and stifled. What, oh what, was she going to do?

Andrew

Running harder than ever before in his twenty-one years, Andrew bolted around the corner of a dilapidated barn, nearly colliding with a propped up pitchfork. Heart pounding against his chest, his throat was parched for lack of water. His eyes stung and his breath came like the repeated shots of a gun. Suddenly the sole of his foot made contact with a patch of mud, while his eyes had been focused over his shoulder and he fell down flat. For a moment he lay perfectly still, until the shouts of men and the howls of dogs reached his ears. He pushed himself up and tried to press on. He had to make it…


To the KING be all the glory!